CRIT POST

Jul. 10th, 2015 04:58 am
halfcocked: (zz how I spent my summer vacation)
VISITORS FROM THE DGM DRESSING ROOM, Devit's AU/character info is here.

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OH YEAH. Last night after talking to someone I realized that I DO NOT ACTUALLY HAVE A CRIT POST ANYMORE because it used to be housed on Tomo's journal and well lol. So here's a new one!

Crit policy stuff: I accept crit through basically any method you prefer. Anon or non-anon doesn't matter to me. You can comment on this post, e-mail me (halfcocked at livejournal, or monkeypop at gmail,), PM me on IRC (Devit), or comment to me in [livejournal.com profile] cfud_concrit. I comment there pretty much every week; I only skip if I'm very late to the post AND I didn't play much that week. My AIM is failnoah.

Comments will be screened here and anon commenting should be on, IP logging should be off. If you are commenting here, let me know whether you want your comment to remain screened. I WILL PROBABLY WANT TO REPLY TO YOU. And when I do I'll just rescreen them both, and then if you want to reply BACK you can do it in a new comment so it doesn't unscreen the whole thread. But I won't bother if you don't care/want the comments to be visible anyway.

The only thing I ask wrt crit is that you put up with my babbling a little at you. |D Please don't take this as like. "LET ME EXPLAIN WHY I AM RIGHT AND YOU ARE WRONG." Because that's not it at all and I take everything into account, even if I don't agree with it. But I love talking about my characters and explaining their minds! And if something's wrong I like to know where it WENT wrong so I can work on that without worrying about stuff that . . . is not wrong. For this reason I like crit in PM, actually, but that makes it harder to be not anon and not everyone uses it anyway, so post/comment/e-mail are all equally fine with me. (Also with PM there's the chance I'll be busy.) I will probably be slowest about noticing an e-mail.

FINALLY, this is open to everyone! CFUD muns, non-players, and yes people from the Dressing Room too since I like to dick around there lol. You can also use this post to contact me in general if you have something uncritty to say or a question or want to say hi or who the hell knows. I dunno what you crazy kids do these days!

I currently play Devit (D.Gray-man) and Shuzen Cocoa (Rosario + Vampire). If you're here you're probably here for Devit, have at.
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this is what Demyx will be getting in his inbox later, cut for image :'D

oh deviantArt )
halfcocked: (pic#1156930)
[yep.

speaking of which, HAKUREN OAK, there's a note on the door of the Churchshack telling you to head to the Jasdevi cabin . . . ]
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[this is a continuations post.

also, warning for rape discussion in some threads below!]

HEY DUDES

Oct. 31st, 2011 11:32 pm
halfcocked: (Candy Mountain Ticky!!)
SO I AM ON THE WAY TO BED but I was having thoughts earlier so I wanna gauge interest :B

Devit's always been offlimits for body swapping before because of the many complications of it/the fact that it would have driven him insane, but boy is probably finally stable enough to come out of it all right, and I am interested in giving it a shot if anyone wants to swap with him!

BUT HERE'S THE CATCH. Bodyswapping with Devit will probably not end well for your character. He has a lot of mental and some physical problems which he's been living with for six years now, so he's gotten very good at being Mostly Okay. Without the benefit of that experience, inheriting Bondomu will not really be FUN TIMES.

Basically I am wondering if anyone wants to break their character a little. :B HERE IS WHAT DEVIT'S BODY COMES WITH:

1. a voice in your head telling you to destroy all of humanity and God
2. a Bond to Jasdero, who is not in camp, so it pretty much feels like he's missing half of his soul all the time
3. nightmares of the Apocalypse
4. periodic bouts of agonizing pain in his left arm and eye (from Innocence poisoning)
5. general decrease in empathy, increase in violence, and hatred of humanity

NOW I KNOW HOW Y'ALL LIKE HURTING YOUR CHARACTERS SO IF ANYONE IS INTO . . . PLAYING ALL OF THAT OUT, hit me up! Note that I have no idea yet when I am going to do this so that's flexible \o/ COULD BE SOON COULD BE IN A MONTH.

Here are some other things:

1. I would definitely prefer him to end up in a human body, the more normal the better
2. I'd prefer a male body unless it's a girl he knows well for Various Reasons
3. Someone who already is close to the cast/knows about the Noah would be pretty cool

But none of those things are necessary! THEY ARE NOT DEALBREAKERS though they'd affect my priorities yeah.

THAT IS, IF ANYONE IS EVEN INTERESTED. LAY IT ON ME IF YOU ARE.
halfcocked: (dude are you bangin' a website?)
[IT'S THE NIGHT OF DAY . . . okay that doesn't work here

but it's night, and someone's at ~Shuri Oak's~ window]
halfcocked: (no no that's foolish thinking)
Kay so to follow up on the character book stuff! Devit is physically updating but is not truly canon updating because it's too--wacky. His camp circumstances make him impossible to slot back into canon anyway so he's essentially canonfrozen except for when I decide to update him with dumb shit like the following. Things that are happening. In a post I am about to do.


* He's grown four inches, making him 5'7" fuck yeah! Because of this, camp is replacing his wardrobe entirely. With horrible things, probably. He is not reverting to his new canon weight, though; he's staying heavier than that because in camp he ACTUALLY EATS. His stats and permissions have been updated to reflect this!

* He will start having pains in his left arm regularly because it's still ~infected~. It may also be scarred but since his face isn't, I assume it's not too bad, if it is at all.

* His hair is longer, so he'll start pulling it back loosely.

* GENERALLY LOOKS A LITTLE OLDER

* I THINK THIS IS ALL

8DDD

Jul. 10th, 2011 12:15 am
halfcocked: (bet they won't be expecting that)
FFFF MORE ARTBOOK STUFF!

DEVIT HAS A NEW PROFILE PAGE HERE!

No translation yet but this means I need to update his stats because BREAKING NEWS! The Noah do in fact age because Devit has gotten taller! AWESOME.

So, I will probably update him in making him bigger but not in making him . . . crazier. Because at this point in CFUD I can't really reset him that way! So Devit is essentially canon-frozen unless I get canon that shows me he's playable as his updated self without me undoing three years of development. (See Shuri's translation of the sketch in the last post, about how apparently Devit and Jasdero have gotten scarier and darker and more dangerous since their fight with Krory lolol.)

But god he'll be so happy that he's aging. ftr his new height is 5'7" and his new canon weight is 117 lbs but he's gained more than that in CFUD ha ha. He's more like, let's say 130 lbs. Still underweight for his size but not by much, because he has a small frame.

MORE UPDATES AS THEY COME?!

ETA: ha ha omg so Jasdero's hair IS IN FACT A WIG, and Devit . . . is the one who chose it?!

totally justified in giving him a blond fetish

THIS HAIR

Jul. 6th, 2011 08:16 pm
halfcocked: (y'see I gotta go out in this car)
DEVIT GETS A PARAGRAPH AND SOME ART IN THE NEW DGM CHARACTER BOOK

. . .

. . . Devit what . . .

. . .

. . . what happen

ETA SHURI TRANSLATED FOR ME IN THE COMMENTS BECAUSE OAKS LOVE ME ♥
halfcocked: (can't you see my dick in my hand?!)
[which is to say that there isn't any period, for Devit, of wondering why Jasdero's not in bed with him. he can feel it as soon as he wakes up.

after crying it out some, stumbling his way towards the Churchshack. still crying it out, though.]


(( JOURNAL STUFF FOR FALLOUT FROM JASDERO LEAVING GOES HERE. open to anyone! COME SEE THE CRYING NOAH ))
halfcocked: (_)
[they've made it back home with Spikie, and Devit leads them into the bedroom to flop around and do some talking/planning.]
halfcocked: (_)
[later that evening, someone is looking for Jasdero]
halfcocked: (♀ EGGS DON'T RIPEN!)
[heading into the cabin with Shuri la la la]

AW YEAH

Jan. 4th, 2011 12:53 am
halfcocked: (I'm helping!)


PARTY IN THIS MOTHERFUCKING JOURNAL!







except for how I am about to go to bed because I have my 90-day review at work in the morning shut up life decisions
halfcocked: (these pretzels are making me thirsty)
[in the ~awesome amazing Jasdevi cabin~ this morning, someone is just starting to wake up.]
halfcocked: (bet they won't be expecting that)
I WANT TO A QUESTIONS MEME TOO actually I was thinking about it just last night so there. :B

This is that thing where you ask me anything and I ask back! TELL ME WHO YOU PLAY TOO.

I play Devit Cocoa and Envy woo!

I might be slowish because I will go to bed . . . tonight . . . eventually. :|a
halfcocked: (zz how I spent my summer vacation)
After doing the meme yesterday I got all obsessed with my drop dates. LUCKILY I remembered that LJ has that AWESOME ?poster=USERNAME feature. So basically I went through CFO and found every single drop notice I'd done. NICE.

I like having that info for the future so! Here is my app list--not the meme, but the list of apps, usernames, etc. that I already had on this journal, only updated with the dates I played them and the number of comments those journals had (since I just looked all that up yesterday anyway).

There is no AWESOME COMMENTARY here, just crap for my own reference. Also a couple of characters are missing dates, REMEMBER TO TRY AND FIND THOSE, SELF :|a

MY APPS from May 2005 to present day )

why

Dec. 25th, 2010 04:49 pm
halfcocked: (I gotta lot of those heartaches)
Okay guys prepare for pain. I know I am. I am starting this at 1:30 PM, let's see how many hours it takes me of starting and stopping to actually fill out this whole thing baw.

PLAYER STATS MEME, WHY AM I EVEN DOING THIS oh right because I do want a updated record of this sure

32 APPS GO UNDER THE CUT . . .  )

I've played here HOW long? 2,035 days.
Overall Comment Count: oh Christ uh ~273,636 HOLY SHIT WHAT NO!
Average Comments Per Day: 134
Shortest Kept: pretty sure it was Makie!
Longest Kept: Chisame! I FORGET DATES OKAY
Most Played: Devit (98,704) or Tomo (85,979 with more of those in CFUD proper)
Least Played: Karin and Remiel (224)
Highest Percentage: Yamazaki, Viper, Keroro, Kanako, Tomo #2, Iono, Envy #2 (100%)
Lowest Percentage: Shirley #2 (83%)
Number of successful apps: 32/32



P.S. IT'S ALMOST 5 PM
halfcocked: (_)
[someone's at your window, Hakuren, late in the evening on the 22nd . . . ]
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